PURPOSE to describe
WALT show not tell in our writing
I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking
I will leave the audience hanging
His lips were quivering, goosebumps crawling up his arm like a spider.
Sweat began to drip down off his head. He started to shake like a tree in the wind. Just imagining what was going to happed next…
Can you tell what emotion I've in my writing