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Friday, 14 November 2014

WALT: Write about if i was a animal what would I be.
If I  could be a animal I would be a brown and black guard dog so I can protectd my famiy. haveing  a job in the house would be cool.  It would be cool to hlep the world and make the world be a safe place.


Monday, 3 November 2014

Show don't tell


WALT show not tell in our writing


He  had a huge smile on his face. Jumping up and down. Laying before him was dark blue waves. Putting one foot in front of the other. The waves pounding on me. Paddling back to the soft boiling sand covering myself with it jumping up and running back to the  waves.Sinking into the dark shining  sand pulling my feet out. Jumping out into the shining waves. Seeing  the sand flying through the air - bam it hit my  face  saying I am going to get you back. Just thinking what the rest of the day was going to be like...  

Wednesday, 10 September 2014

PURPOSE to describe
WALT show not tell in our writing



WILF
I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking

I will leave the audience hanging



His lips were quivering, goosebumps crawling up his arm like a spider.
Sweat began to drip down off his head. He started to shake like a tree in the wind. Just imagining what was going to happed next…


Can you tell what emotion I've in my writing

Wednesday, 27 August 2014

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Thursday, 21 August 2014

WALT: Find a qote and put it on my blog here is my one.

Thursday, 24 July 2014

Five Minute Frenzy

WALT: increase our basic facts recall speed
Hi every day we have to do a Five Minute Frenzy to help as get better and faster at our Addition. My teacher thinks It helps the class and I do too. Thanks Mr Vickerstaff for being a good teacher

Wednesday, 23 July 2014

Five Minute Frenzy

WALT: increase our basic facts recall speed
Hi  I think that I am geting better at my  five minute frenzy every day If you think I am geting better.





Thursday, 3 July 2014

Five Minute Frenzy


4 Day update of my Five Minute Frenzy.It is makeing me fast at my Addition.

Thursday, 19 June 2014

Room 5 Five Minute Addition Frenzy

This is my 5 Five Minute Addition Frenzy evrey day we do a 5 Five Minute Addition Frenzy and here is my one for today and for the rest of the term. I will update it and if the line go's down I am geting bad if the line go's up I am geting better her is my one.

Tuesday, 10 June 2014

My hero

it was a bit nivracing when I went up on the stage after I had do my  bit of witering on stage I felt good about myself.

Jack super heroe

this week my class was createing a super heroe and listing what the super heroe is like here is my one.
Name: J Cole
Powers: all the superhero powers
Weakness: lava,light.Doctor Jack.
how my superhero got powers: he was born like that.
where it lives: the moon.

worst fear: Doctor Jack





Monday, 14 April 2014

Just kidding

Today my class was lerning to record our Just kidding using audioboo. i think next time i sould wr work fastter.

Monday, 7 April 2014

Three Billy Goats Gruff Ending

"I will give you something else i will go fishing for rotten fish for you" said the big goat to the ugly old fat troll. The ugly old fat troll said "no i am too hungry and I do not like rotten fish I like rotten meat and I do not want to have what you have said" the ugly old fat troll said to the big goat. "I have some rotten meat here i will give it to you if i can go over your bridge please i Just want some sweet grass" said the goat. "Ok you can go over my bridge" said the troll "just this onces!" Would you like to be my bff and come to the movies with us" said the big goat to the old fat troll. "Yes" said the troll to the goats so the goats and the troll lived happily eating sweet green grass and the troll eat rotten meat.

 The end .


 This is about using my imagination